Feelings feelings
All so gone without any kneading
Always about me and how am feeling
Everyone if not all look at it like a killing
Always so right in mine own mind without an ending
The world matters not if towards me it ain’t attending.
So am lost in me and the world without
It all fades off without a shout
The buzzing cars and noise eases off like an indian flute
Blown by the valley and hence all sound spout
Out into the nethers of the clustered clout
Help me find me if am hence to sprout….
PePa.
Someone,anyone or everyone,please continue this with PePa.
Feelings are important!
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Thanks a lot chocoviv.I appreciate your tender response.
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You are welcome ๐
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so sweet of you Chocoviv….mmmh choco(chocolaty) -viv(Vivian) right?
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Yes:)
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Ooooh beautiful.So somebody loves chocoalate huh?
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Yup!
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Reminds me of a poem I wrote sometime back called :This chocolate bar.
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Hussein, I will take a shot at continuing your prose.
True feelings come from you to me
When will I finally ask more of she
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I am truly humbled by your sentiments and deep thought comments my brother Ricchard.A true encouragement that someone out there in this big wild world appreciates my thoughts.You are a true blessing and so is your work.
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great lines
blown by the valley…into the nethers
keep writing!
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Thanks a lot KRC .Amma do just that and make the world a better place.Bless you girlie.
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You really expressed this beautifully โค๐๐
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Thanks a lot Joel.And was busy going through your mama narration which is an actual masterpiece I had to share.Bless you bro.
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Wow really? I’m humbled by this. Thank you for sharing it. I appreciate that โค๐ฏ๐๐
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You are welcome my bro.From a brother to another…I love good work and this was well thought and penned…
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